Monday, March 19, 2012

Free writing week 1

                                                 The advantage of Smiling
      Smiling is a kind of attitude. Smiling can make you happy , healthy ,and you can feel the life nicer when you smile . There are a lot of ways to smile . Especialy , we can smile without any reason . First , smiling makes you happy even others people happy because of your smiling . For example ,  when you are down , you should try to put a smile on your face . That is the good change for your mood to make it better . When someone smiles , they change the mood of others people , and make things more excited .
Second , smiling is a miracle medicine for everyone from a child to older , from a sicker to healther , and for any hurt or illness. Because when you smile , yu will decrease stress , and increase happiness. There are a lot of example in the life , when they smile , they can decrease their illness , even cancer . We can eassily find it on the Internet. In conclusion , smiling is the important part in the life . When you smile,you will have a lot of advantages , only you but also others .

1 comment:

  1. This is a good topic, but some parts are a little confusing because of the word forms. We do not have words in English such as "a sicker", "healther", or "yu." Pay more attention to the spelling of your words as you type.

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